What should I change?

Sajra - Lost City
Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
edited January 2009 in The Fanatics Forum
Hello, I just got my free makeover scroll and i'm wondering what a should change on Sajra, I mostly like her (especially the hair) but i was wondering what could change. The one thing I wouldn't like different is her hair.
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Far:
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Close:
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Everything.

    It's fugly.
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  • Amiris - Sanctuary
    Amiris - Sanctuary Posts: 1,167 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Ignore the previous person.
    And you may want to lower the bust size a bit.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Thanks for the feedback, yeah i didn't really realize it was so big till after the two days were up... so yes i'll do that.
    Other person, thats not feedback. I'm asking for HOW to improve it, not just having people come up and insult it, because thats pointless.
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  • vogun
    vogun Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    I also don't think there's anything that needs changing. Your character is cute as she is.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Thank you :D. I'm mostly happy with her but a little feedback on how my char could be better would be nice (mostly because of the free makeover scroll).
    Nice siggy btw.
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  • Davitiel - Heavens Tear
    Davitiel - Heavens Tear Posts: 978 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Your character looks very nice! Nice use of color and good facial proportions. I would change the lips just a bit, a smile would be nice because she looks like Mrs. Attitude. Perhaps an adjustment to the eye rotation and a tiny change in openness could be an improvement. The bust size is too large for your character's complexion, decreasing the size would probably be ideal. Maybe an increse in the leg width may be good, I think that she has a bit of chicken legs compared to the bust size, changing the bust size could solve this problem.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    great thanks :D.
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    What's wrong with my suggestion?

    I think everything needs to be fixed.

    Bad hair, bad hair color, skin color, eyes...etc.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Well, as you'd put it, everything.
    #1: That was an insult, which are annoying and pointless.
    #2: You only said it needed improvement, not how to improve it.
    #3: You said pretty much the exact same thing both times, which isn't much of an argument.

    Oh and you forgot to put bad before the eyes, just so you know.
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  • bobzilla21
    bobzilla21 Posts: 694 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    looks too serious, make her happier.
    I think the hair's too light too, but you don't want to change that...
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    I do like the hair, yes, she does need to smile a little bit.
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  • mecurial
    mecurial Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    u look so gorgeous b:dirtyb:kiss except for the hair color b:shocked.!

    You might think it looks cool but it's just weird, and not matching. just dye 1 or mix up to 2 color for ur hair. All the rest r fine.
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  • Tailynne - Lost City
    Tailynne - Lost City Posts: 141 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    DO NOT TOUCH THE HAIR! Dadgum that chick's got some rad hair yo. Perfect in the face man, but that bust size is comical. I never thought I'd say this, but you gotta shrink the **** some. Those things are obnoxious.
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Sajra - Lost City wrote: »
    Oh and you forgot to put bad before the eyes, just so you know.

    And skin color.

    But maybe I added an extra bad before hair color?

    Jeez PWI forums have really degraded.
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  • tallia
    tallia Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    evrilysis wrote: »
    And skin color.

    But maybe I added an extra bad before hair color?

    Jeez PWI forums have really degraded.


    Only because of people like you. b:angry

    You don't make a helpful suggestion, just make some useless post that is grating and trolling.


    For your information, these are NOT the WoW forums. If you wish to be a troll, GO THERE. We don't want you here in that case. b:angry


    Now if you wish to be helpful instead of irritating and trollish, then do so, but don't make posts that simply do nothing positive and are only negative and trolling.
  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Thanks, yeah the bust does need to be smaller. Not everyone agrees with the hair choice, but i really like it so thats the one thing i wont change.
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    You're fat.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Ok. Now get off my thread, stop spamming. Your annoying me and probably everyone else who's read your posts b:angry.
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    I'm being annoying?
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  • Evermyst - Sanctuary
    Evermyst - Sanctuary Posts: 26 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Despite what some other people might say, I don't think you should change the hair. We need more people in PW with some style, don't you think?

    That being said, her legs are a bit skinny, especially compared to the ginormous ****, lol.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Evrilysis, yes, you are. Now either post some USEFUL feedback or leave.
    EverMyst, thank you for the feedback.
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  • Enoteca - Sanctuary
    Enoteca - Sanctuary Posts: 110 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    **** a bit smaller, lol I understand you didn't notice until the 2 days were up, same thing happened to me.

    Legs just a tad wider...BUT I LOVE THE FACE! I wouldn't change it. Maybe a smile if you want:)

    and, props on the hair, I like it b:laugh
  • Fleuri - Sanctuary
    Fleuri - Sanctuary Posts: 1,763 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    I agree with most of your other posters here: Your character's face looks nice, but her proportions could be improved.

    I am not sure if I would make her smile or not. Depending on her face structure, smiles might not work. But I certainly would try!

    Also, with her hair and lips, I would be tempted to try putting some light bit of purple in her eyebrows. I do not know if I could find a color that I would like, but if I had your character I would want to try! :)
  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Yes, the legs and bust could certainly use improving. I'm also glad someone put out some sugestions on her eyebrows, because they've been bugging me but i wasn't sure what to do about it. b:pleased.
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  • evrilysis
    evrilysis Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Reroll as Paladin.
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  • Sajra - Lost City
    Sajra - Lost City Posts: 169 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    Sigh... sigh... sigh...
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  • bobzilla21
    bobzilla21 Posts: 694 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    he's from ragequit, what do you expect?
    I figured I should do something with my sig, so I made this for fun. My very first (poorly made) animation. b:victory
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    As for why Luffy is murdering Naruto, I have no idea either, but it looks cool.b:laugh
  • Twiggz - Sanctuary
    Twiggz - Sanctuary Posts: 6 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    I agree with fixing the bust size and legs, but the hair and face look fine to me. :) I like the colours you used for your hair, I mostly see black and silver.
    And wow, evrilysis is being very immature. "You're fat"? Honestly? That's just sad. :S
  • Sorenshi - Heavens Tear
    Sorenshi - Heavens Tear Posts: 44 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    She's looking like she wants to say 'Where are YOU looking at?!', lol.
    Make her smile a bit, and lower the eyes+eyebrows a bit, A BIT, so that you can hardly notice you've changed it. Really; lowering them a little bit can make her look completely different.
    I've edited your character the way I would edit her (Left side was before, right after) :
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  • heladrin33
    heladrin33 Posts: 1 Arc User
    edited January 2009
    i think the bust size is perfect in my opnion but change wat u like in my opnion ur character is amazing and looks very pretty :)
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