What should I change?
Sajra - Lost City
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Hello, I just got my free makeover scroll and i'm wondering what a should change on Sajra, I mostly like her (especially the hair) but i was wondering what could change. The one thing I wouldn't like different is her hair.
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Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.
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Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.
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Everything.
It's fugly.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0 -
Ignore the previous person.
And you may want to lower the bust size a bit.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Credit to Symour for the signature.
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Thanks for the feedback, yeah i didn't really realize it was so big till after the two days were up... so yes i'll do that.
Other person, thats not feedback. I'm asking for HOW to improve it, not just having people come up and insult it, because thats pointless.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
I also don't think there's anything that needs changing. Your character is cute as she is.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0
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Thank you . I'm mostly happy with her but a little feedback on how my char could be better would be nice (mostly because of the free makeover scroll).
Nice siggy btw.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
Your character looks very nice! Nice use of color and good facial proportions. I would change the lips just a bit, a smile would be nice because she looks like Mrs. Attitude. Perhaps an adjustment to the eye rotation and a tiny change in openness could be an improvement. The bust size is too large for your character's complexion, decreasing the size would probably be ideal. Maybe an increse in the leg width may be good, I think that she has a bit of chicken legs compared to the bust size, changing the bust size could solve this problem.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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great thanks .[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
What's wrong with my suggestion?
I think everything needs to be fixed.
Bad hair, bad hair color, skin color, eyes...etc.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0 -
Well, as you'd put it, everything.
#1: That was an insult, which are annoying and pointless.
#2: You only said it needed improvement, not how to improve it.
#3: You said pretty much the exact same thing both times, which isn't much of an argument.
Oh and you forgot to put bad before the eyes, just so you know.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
looks too serious, make her happier.
I think the hair's too light too, but you don't want to change that...I figured I should do something with my sig, so I made this for fun. My very first (poorly made) animation. b:victory
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As for why Luffy is murdering Naruto, I have no idea either, but it looks cool.b:laugh0 -
I do like the hair, yes, she does need to smile a little bit.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
u look so gorgeous b:dirtyb:kiss except for the hair color b:shocked.!
You might think it looks cool but it's just weird, and not matching. just dye 1 or mix up to 2 color for ur hair. All the rest r fine.~~~~la la la~~~~~~
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DO NOT TOUCH THE HAIR! Dadgum that chick's got some rad hair yo. Perfect in the face man, but that bust size is comical. I never thought I'd say this, but you gotta shrink the **** some. Those things are obnoxious.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Cheer up little chappy, take your face off my boot0 -
Sajra - Lost City wrote: »Oh and you forgot to put bad before the eyes, just so you know.
And skin color.
But maybe I added an extra bad before hair color?
Jeez PWI forums have really degraded.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0 -
And skin color.
But maybe I added an extra bad before hair color?
Jeez PWI forums have really degraded.
Only because of people like you. b:angry
You don't make a helpful suggestion, just make some useless post that is grating and trolling.
For your information, these are NOT the WoW forums. If you wish to be a troll, GO THERE. We don't want you here in that case. b:angry
Now if you wish to be helpful instead of irritating and trollish, then do so, but don't make posts that simply do nothing positive and are only negative and trolling.0 -
Thanks, yeah the bust does need to be smaller. Not everyone agrees with the hair choice, but i really like it so thats the one thing i wont change.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
You're fat.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0
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Ok. Now get off my thread, stop spamming. Your annoying me and probably everyone else who's read your posts b:angry.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
I'm being annoying?[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0
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Despite what some other people might say, I don't think you should change the hair. We need more people in PW with some style, don't you think?
That being said, her legs are a bit skinny, especially compared to the ginormous ****, lol.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Evrilysis, yes, you are. Now either post some USEFUL feedback or leave.
EverMyst, thank you for the feedback.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
**** a bit smaller, lol I understand you didn't notice until the 2 days were up, same thing happened to me.
Legs just a tad wider...BUT I LOVE THE FACE! I wouldn't change it. Maybe a smile if you want:)
and, props on the hair, I like it b:laugh0 -
I agree with most of your other posters here: Your character's face looks nice, but her proportions could be improved.
I am not sure if I would make her smile or not. Depending on her face structure, smiles might not work. But I certainly would try!
Also, with her hair and lips, I would be tempted to try putting some light bit of purple in her eyebrows. I do not know if I could find a color that I would like, but if I had your character I would want to try!0 -
Yes, the legs and bust could certainly use improving. I'm also glad someone put out some sugestions on her eyebrows, because they've been bugging me but i wasn't sure what to do about it. b:pleased.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Forsaken Sigs
Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
Reroll as Paladin.[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0
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Sigh... sigh... sigh...[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Sajra - Level 31 - Hell Archer.0 -
he's from ragequit, what do you expect?I figured I should do something with my sig, so I made this for fun. My very first (poorly made) animation. b:victory
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As for why Luffy is murdering Naruto, I have no idea either, but it looks cool.b:laugh0 -
I agree with fixing the bust size and legs, but the hair and face look fine to me. I like the colours you used for your hair, I mostly see black and silver.
And wow, evrilysis is being very immature. "You're fat"? Honestly? That's just sad. :S0 -
She's looking like she wants to say 'Where are YOU looking at?!', lol.
Make her smile a bit, and lower the eyes+eyebrows a bit, A BIT, so that you can hardly notice you've changed it. Really; lowering them a little bit can make her look completely different.
I've edited your character the way I would edit her (Left side was before, right after) :
*I don't have 1337 editing skills as you can see >.<[sigpic]http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk296/rmdesignsdotorg/sorenshi.png[/sigpic]
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i think the bust size is perfect in my opnion but change wat u like in my opnion ur character is amazing and looks very pretty0
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