A Neverending Couple...

Zehethos - Heavens Tear
Zehethos - Heavens Tear Posts: 131 Arc User
edited September 2008 in The Fanatics Forum
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Cover of my new story I am writing :D NOTE: This is a PREIVEW of my story not the full thing :P

The story is about a Winged Elf and a Venomancer that are inloved. The story is alot like Romeo and Juliet except the 2 main characters are Salex and Zehethos. They are not aloud to see or talk to eachother because there is a huge war between these two nations and marrying to a Elf and a Untamed Species is NOT aloud because the Elven Queen and the Elven King thinks that all Untamed are brutal wild animals from the City of the Lost. Salex and Zehethos is now on a huge adventure to try to be free from these laws and live together for the rest of their lives. Meanwhile back at the Floating Palace Heaven's Tear, a new leader named Nepeshadi came to power. Nepeshadi wishes to wipe out the winged Elves for good. So, he sent out spies and raiders that are flying dragons or anything that can fly to wipe out the Elves. Before, there was once a very powerful and wise ruler named Setah. Setah used to be great friends with both nations but he was a Elf and he used to be great friends with the Untamed leader. He unfortunately had a terrible coma and he felt ill and died. His successor Nepeshadi came into power. He started to call Elves a 'brutal' race and called the queen a "overweight Tarox". The queen got infuriated with his power so after that, they went to war. Almost all the Untamed was on Nepeshadi's side while almost all of the Winged Elves was on the Queen's side. After this was happening. Many Elves rushed from there home. One of them was Salex, a romancing charming young Elf. He flew away and found himself in the City of the Lost. There was a new person just starting out. Her name was Zehethos. Once he saw her, he just glanced at her... Checking her out, he simply rushed over to her and said "Hey how are ya?" The young Venomancer replied shyly "Umm... do I know you or something?" "Why should you know me after I do this!" The elf grabbed on to the shy young Venomancer and flew high into the air "Ahh!! I'm so scared!!!" shouted the young Venomancer "Its alright" said Salex in a soothing voice "You wont fall... I just grabbed ya on really tight so you wont fall off" He then starts to kiss the young Venomancer "Wow..." Said the young Venomancer. Alot of people watched this and many of them became furious "Why did she just kissed a piece of filth like that???" Said one of them "I don't know, lets KILL THEM!" Arrow rained across the sky and soon enough in a flash... They dissapear...

Hehe, That's all I can write now. Soon, you will see the full story.

Comment and rate :D
I am a wraith army commander. I command the Wraiths. I order them to kill. I order them to attack. I order them to tell them to shut up. I order them to do anything I tell them to do. I killed many people. You might be next.
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Comments

  • Dinomanz - Lost City
    Dinomanz - Lost City Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited September 2008
    Uhhhhh I was good till he flew to the City of Lost then it got plain cheesy lol so you might want to change the ending a lot but overall I give you a 7/10. 10 being the best 1 being the wost.
  • Darknin - Lost City
    Darknin - Lost City Posts: 378 Arc User
    edited September 2008
    it should be the other way around :D
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  • crushthefake
    crushthefake Posts: 1 Arc User
    edited September 2008
    niiiiice intro babe. 10/10
  • Zehethos - Heavens Tear
    Zehethos - Heavens Tear Posts: 131 Arc User
    edited September 2008
    niiiiice intro babe. 10/10

    Thanks Salex I love you
    I am a wraith army commander. I command the Wraiths. I order them to kill. I order them to attack. I order them to tell them to shut up. I order them to do anything I tell them to do. I killed many people. You might be next.
  • shizo
    shizo Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited September 2008
    All the best you two.
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    Shizo - Blademaster 9x - Conqueror

    Quitted trolling the forums. PM me ingame, if want something

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