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_LeaderAlan_ - Lost City
_LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
edited May 2010 in Off-Topic Discussion
Information:

Working on a papper
Looking for feedback and your thoughts and ideas.

Hope you like it.b:laugh

Keep in mind I am working on it as I go.
So far this is intro.


Theses:

Main Point #1
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4.

Main Point #2
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3.
4.

Opposition’s main point #1
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3.
4.

Refutation of opposition’s main point #1
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2.
3.
4.

Oppositions main point #2
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3.
4.

Refutation of opposition’s main point #2
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Main point #3
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4.

Conclusion:


Theses:
Government control in education affects the entire generation.

Main point#1:
Limited Information:
1.Book s.
2.Teachers.
3.Schools.
4. Curriculum.

Main point#2
Monopoly
1. Government controlled public schools
2. Taxes.
3. Restricted not open minded.
4. Society its self restricts open minded thinking

Opposition’s main point #1
Information needs to be regulated:
1.Books.
2. Teachers.
3. Schools.
4. Curriculum.

Refutation of opposition’s main point #1
1.Books from outside sources. Fresh information.
2.Teachers with out being manipulated on what the government wants them to teach.
3.Schools with a open market.
4.Curriculum including the key facts even if it includes religious information..

Oppositions main point #2
Education needs to be regulated.
1.
2. People will not have the money to pay for this.
3.Privite schooling.
4.home schooling.

Refutation of opposition’s main point #2
1.What open market has to offer.
2.Sale prices on land and no school taxes.
3.Money.
4.Curriculum approved by the state department of education.

Main point #3
Have a government monopoly restricts the way people think.
1.Human Molds
2.Thinking process
3.Knowledge
4.How it affects the future.

Conclusion:
Government control in education affects the entire generation.
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  • _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City
    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    I removed it, the replys were off topic I will try again later.


    http://pwi-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?p=8031032#post8031032
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  • _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City
    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 1 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 2 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 3 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 4 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 5 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 6 after thoughts
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    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Parapraph 7 after thoughts
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  • _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City
    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Work Cited
    Lastname, Firstname. "Article Title." Site Name. Organization Name. Article date. Web. Date of access.

    Geinsberg, Benjamin. Lowi, Theodore. Weir, Margaret. “An introduction to American Politics” www.wwnorton.com. W.W. Norton and Company. Web. 23 April 2010.

    Fritz, Marshall. “How government control even local had ruined public education.” www.SchoolAndState.org. Alliance for the Separation of School & State. 15 October 2002. Web. 23 April 2010.
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  • AlbireoTwo - Lost City
    AlbireoTwo - Lost City Posts: 2,056 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Could have just done it in one post............
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    Thank you Forsakenx for the picture. b:thanks
  • _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City
    _LeaderAlan_ - Lost City Posts: 128 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    I wanted feed back as I wrote but there is all collected in one block of text b:shocked.
    I had it all was going to sort though it but I need sleep.
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  • VerenKaunis - Dreamweaver
    VerenKaunis - Dreamweaver Posts: 1,099 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Good God! Why?!?!b:infuriated

    You invoked Godwin's Law, therefore your post (and by extension, your paper) is worthless. b:scorn

    Kidding. I'll read the rest of it in a bit...maybe. b:avoid
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  • Zikai - Heavens Tear
    Zikai - Heavens Tear Posts: 153 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    Um... I would've suggested uploading your essay and outline into a free file sharing program and just posting the links instead of this... organization that you did.

    It pretty much made me not want to read it with how awkwardly grouped it is on these many posts, lol. Sorry.
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  • AlbireoTwo - Lost City
    AlbireoTwo - Lost City Posts: 2,056 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    That's better. Getting the whole thing in one post looks a lot neater.
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    Thank you Forsakenx for the picture. b:thanks
  • MagicHamsta - Lost City
    MagicHamsta - Lost City Posts: 10,466 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    me would comment but me comment and views would exceed current human knowledge
    ._.'

    well me suppose me can say that school food tastes funny. (it be safe to eat but still....odd stuff)
    (>.<)'
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  • AlbireoTwo - Lost City
    AlbireoTwo - Lost City Posts: 2,056 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    MagicHamsta - Lost City wrote: »
    me would comment but me comment and views would exceed current human knowledge
    ._.'

    well me suppose me can say that school food tastes funny. (it be safe to eat but still....odd stuff)
    (>.<)'
    That's debateable.....Usually safe to eat.....
    b:avoid
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    Thank you Forsakenx for the picture. b:thanks
  • MagicHamsta - Lost City
    MagicHamsta - Lost City Posts: 10,466 Arc User
    edited May 2010
    hmm well yesh it be safe to humans in general
    (>.<)'
    me forget some humans still has issues with things which others of their kind doesn't have due to their diversity.

    me information be a bit outdated but me spent a few years in a human elementary/high school (they be close to each other so me just went wherever me pleased) since we had no suitable hamster housing ._.'
    me recommend staying away from the so called "shakes (?)"
    and me detected actual wood and vegetation in a few samples of "cal-zone"

    and adopt us
    T.T'
    even if we do die/fake our death after 5 years or so.
    :<
    darthpanda16: Firefox crashed on me. Aryannamage: I don't think I am a GM that would be new.
    Hawk:Do this. closing thread
    frankieraye: I'll see if we can replace the woman with a stick figure and the tiger fangs with marshmallows.//Issues like these need to get escalated quickly to minimize the damage.
    Kantorek: Yeah.. you should try it. It's awesome.
    Sihndra: Nope- not currently possible under any circumstances. Sorry.
    LokisDottir: I mean...not haunting the forums, nope nope..
    Konariraiden: You don't know what you are up against. You will lose.
    Waiting for...Hamster Packs!
    58% chance to get tokens
    41% chance to get an all class pet hamster....but they has already been freed by the magic hamster.
    1% chance to get ban hamstered with the message "Hamsters United!"
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