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Harassment of Harriers

rexcelestisrexcelestis Posts: 194 Arc User
edited May 2014 in Fan Base Alpha
I've tried my hand at machina, again. I'd appreciate any feedback people care to offer.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wKfSogd5N8s
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  • agentcanadaagentcanada Posts: 775 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    That was pretty cool, I had a problem with the sound but that might have just been on my end. It seems to break up or stutter at several spots.
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  • kharma23kharma23 Posts: 403 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    Very nice job! I really like Harrier King vs the Destroid!
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  • stergasterga Posts: 2,353 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    Not bad. Some minor things. Most scenes would benefit from better transitions. There are too many slow spots that could be cut.

    When Kid Harrier is intro'd, her text should start coming into view as she is running up to the camera with maybe a brief pause before transitioning to the next character. I think a quick horizontal wipe would be better here. Too much pause on the next character and I'm not exactly sure what the text says. Keep the name up while zooming out so there is much less frozen frame. The archer would benefit from having the camera rotate behind after / as she shoots the Argent guy so that both of them end up in the frame at the same time. Cygnet (I think) has a hard to read font and doesn't actually do anything. The scene where Harrier King is beating up on the glowing lighting thing could use to be zoomed out and have less graphic intensity. In the last scene, the second character should come into view on the very first beat instead of the second. The kid in the kitty cat shirt is oddly away from everyone else. Although, with the cutting this scene would be in a totally different part of the song, but you can just cut the song itself.

    And put the music credits in the description as well as the video end. Possibly with links.

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  • rexcelestisrexcelestis Posts: 194 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    Thank you everyone. Exactly the types of feedback I was looking for!
  • canadascottcanadascott Posts: 1,257 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    I quite enjoyed that, Rex.
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  • rexcelestisrexcelestis Posts: 194 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    canadascott wrote: »
    I quite enjoyed that, Rex.

    Why thank you, good sir.
  • flyingfinnflyingfinn Posts: 8,408 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    Dang i wish i had time(skill) to make something like that of all my alts.
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