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Celestus (The Comic Series)

Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
edited August 2012 in Fan Base Alpha
Hello guys! My first comic series is finally up after a year of planning and script writing, I managed to upload it in a different CO forum site (Since there are limits in the forums here) so please check it out and if you feel like it, drop some suggestions :D further details are listed with the link below :D

http://champions-online.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=roleplaying&thread=2213&page=1

Thank you! I hope you guys enjoy it :D
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  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited June 2012
    Looks pretty good from what I saw! Quite nice work on the visual effects added in there.

    For the next chapter, I'd recommend you try using /demorecord for action shots; extremely useful for capturing perfect freeze-frame moments, as well as shooting from unusual angles and getting close-ups.

    The last thing: The typographer in me says that Comic-Sans is probably not the way to go, you know. One of these fonts would fit the bill much better, and suit the comicbook style perfectly!
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited June 2012
    Wow sir, those fonts are fantastic! i'd like to get my hands on some :) thank you so much for dropping by your suggestions :) it seriously meant a lot to me since it kinda means that someone is actually reading it ^^ got nervous that it would be a total failure but I guess it gave a good vibe.

    my problem with the action shots is that i had to get help from my girlfriend. She would sit next to me and press the prntscrn key whenever i tell her to while i manage the angles and stuff, but since the demorecord is kinda new to me, ill practice it since it is in fact, very useful in getting those perfect action moments :D

    again, thanks for reading and giving out suggestions ill be making chapter 2 soon ^_^
  • tx6275tx6275 Posts: 5 Arc User
    edited July 2012
    Not to nitpick but on page 7 (the first one after the introduction although it's named 'A1C1Page3'?) you have a "rouge soldier on a mission". Unless it's a very embarrassing mission I'm calling typo on it... :tongue:
    menotrpa: O_O........how long has this been going?
    flyingfinn: People being dicks towards one another?... I think that started when the stuff rose from the sea and acknowledge there was some other stuff next to it and started to poke it.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • nordveignordveig Posts: 132 Arc User
    edited August 2012
    Archived Post wrote: »
    Hello guys! My first comic series is finally up after a year of planning and script writing, I managed to upload it in a different CO forum site (Since there are limits in the forums here) so please check it out and if you feel like it, drop some suggestions :D further details are listed with the link below :D

    http://champions-online.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=roleplaying&thread=2213&page=1

    Thank you! I hope you guys enjoy it :D

    Bad guy: I'm gonna rip your head off and feed it to the dogs!!
    Superheroine: Wrong choice of words Larry.....SHHHKKK!!!

    LOL!

    I was just 'flicking' through and not really reading it, but that bit was funny....
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