YEAH!!! Grow a spine!! Red your Avatar really sucks. See not that hard. Oh and red don't even say <font color="orange">HAMSTER</font> about my avatar...I stole it from Disturbed fair and square :)
Hi I very much enjoyed your quest. Especially the 1st challenge, brilliant. Great characters and dialogues. Feedback, very minor stuff. read through your dialogues again I noticed a few places where there were punctuation errors, a spell checker won't catch them because they aren't misspelled, the only one I can remember…
Your quest is the BEST quest I have played yet. Everything from beginning to end is well planed and executed superbly. I subbed you and am EAGERLY awaiting your next foundry. BRAVO!!!! Sweetness
Oh, I loved the humor and the mob names. Its got a ton of potential, I look forward to finishing your quest once you finish the edits. Oh one more suggestion. On that first map with the mobs all spread out, perhaps set them to wander then combat ( if they are stationary on purpose then leave it be) Sweetness
Hiya Everything was good to go until the caves. your mob choice and placement is way to tough. I would suggest thinning them out or change some of the mobs but keep the skins. Lottsa hard mobs + CC + traps + close quarters = totally no fun. I did not play past this point. It was really great up until then. Sweetness
Greetings Nice quest. It has alot of potential but I think you should clean it up a bit. Below is my feedback. Dialogue fixes Patrol: We're a bit lost.../ can show you where Dancer: I would / you're very welcome Bouncer: we're guests Belur: you have 2 Ys on yes / We're on the road Amber: Their outfits Sgt. Pyane: make sure…
Make sure it is a valid location in the room. Some rooms have multiple levels and won't you place the encounter there. Also check the Y level on your mobs, they may be spawning above or below the map. They could also be spawning inside walls or details you've placed.
LOL Not at all, I welcome everyone to play it. I'm currently editing it though so you may want to wait to try it. :) MUCHO love to all you smokers/non-smokers out there.
Awesome reviews, Thank you all very much. You all have very valid points. The labyrinth is not as hard as it seems. Dairacsis gives you a big clue on how to complete it. I wanted it to be challenging but not impossible, hmmm perhaps I can come up with a way to bypass it. I have been thinking i need to move that re-spawn…
Meh. I don't create UGC because I want to be known. I create it because I have a story I want to tell and enjoy creating environments. If I become known in the process great. If Cryptic wants to create their own UGC great, more stuff for me to play and inspire me to create something better. If all an author cares about is…
This quest was amazing, nuff said. A few things. Quite a bit of the dialogue needs to be spell checked. I would recommend running it all through a spellchecker. A suggestion, add some more details to your town to liven it up. It seemed kind of bare to me. Some trees, shrubs and flowers. Maybe some furniture, stools,…
I would be mucho happy if you gave me some feedback on my foundry. Its around 50-60 min. A little long but it does not lag very much if at all. I have four reviews need one more :) Thanks.
Thanks a ton for the input Heckle. This campaign is my first foundry so I wasn't quite sure about how long it would run when I designed it. I only knew what I wanted to accomplish story wise. I also am very big when it comes to details. I feel that its the little details that make a quest great, such as having mobs with…
Hi Heckle7 I used a lvl 30 Control Wizard for this quest. I've played quite a few foundries with this toon and died maybe two or three times so my statement about difficulty could be a a bit off. Most of the mobs never made it to me throughout the whole quest. I'm not sure what lvl you set your mobs to but perhaps move up…
Your very welcome for the 5 stars and the tip. I really enjoyed your quest very much. You put a lot of love and sweat into it and it shows. I'm hoping you make a part 2 ;)
Hello Varik75 First good job on your quest I enjoyed it. I like the challenge of the two brothers fight. The dialogue was excellent. Onto the feedback. Below is a list of what I found during my play through. 1. The stone arches in the cemetery are above the ground, I call these floaties. Time to bring them back to earth.…
Hi Heckle7 Just finished up your quest. Good stuff. Dialogue is good, the story flows nicely. Combat difficulty is a little light IMO. Some things you might consider changing/fixing. 1. The first contact, his opening text is in yellow but the rest of the dialogue throughout the whole quest is white. 2. After talking to…
Hi Labmouse I enjoyed the humor of your quest a ton. Your combat mix was just right IMO. I really liked that almost all your NPCs had something to say. A little feedback. There were a couple of floaties when I played through, a table in the corner and a book on one of the tables. Also Frostys bed is floating too. :) Some…
If any of you fellow foundry junkies get the chance please try my first foundry quest. I am working on the second part now and I would like any feedback good or bad to try and make the second part better. Thanks
I tend to not pay attention to the star system at all. I read the description and maybe some reviews. If it sounds interesting I'm in if not, like my favorite Imperial Storm Trooper once said "Move Along". Dailies for foundry content? I would do away with it for the exact reason the OP gave. You get crappy Foundry quests.