lolsorhandMember, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild UsersPosts: 981Bounty Hunter
edited June 2013
Give my dwarven ruin map a go in about 15 min or so (when the publish is done.) if you want. Just added /finetuned the map. Can't add a single detail anymore.. Oh well, we all have to make due one way or another
I would be mucho happy if you gave me some feedback on my foundry. Its around 50-60 min. A little long but it does not lag very much if at all. I have four reviews need one more Thanks.
"Crayons taste like purple"
Campaign: Night of Embers - NWS-DQX5GVNKO 1: A Flame In The Darkness - NW-DE47BTDI9
I would be mucho happy if you gave me some feedback on my foundry. Its around 50-60 min. A little long but it does not lag very much if at all. I have four reviews need one more Thanks.
My advice to you would be to split it up into 2 or 3 separate quests within a campaign.
You will be more likely to see more plays that way.
oldseawulfMember, Neverwinter Beta UsersPosts: 2Arc User
edited June 2013
The Expedition: NW-DQPJCNX18
Duration: About 30mins
It’s my first quest and a bit of a work in progress, but it still needs to be tested by someone other than myself and I could do with some constructive criticism.
Thanks
Duration seems to be about the 30 minute mark, and there is one fight in there that should properly be classed as "tough", not "standard".
Some of the story elements might not make too much sense if you haven't played Pt 1, but I', happy with the story, its more about how it plays and feels.
Many thanks.
EDIT: Just logged in to tweak a few details and noticed I got two reviews overnight (well overnight for me I'm in UK), that bumps me to 6, so if you want to drop it and help other out of Beta Hell that's cool.
The Expedition: NW-DQPJCNX18
Duration: About 30mins
It’s my first quest and a bit of a work in progress, but it still needs to be tested by someone other than myself and I could do with some constructive criticism.
Thanks
So most of the way thru this one I thought wow this is really a great fun quest. 2 great quests in 1 day.
Then I get to the end, and it's feeling like...ok this is draggin on a bit, could tighten some stuff.
Then i kill the dudes in last room and I'm expecting the treasure chest, but instead I talk to these 2 guys, and no treasure chest. It says...go thru the portal, so I'm like..ok. I do and then the quest is gone from my journal.
A little disappointing, esp since it was so long.
In short, there are some spelling errors & I would work to tighten up what you have ...try to shave some time off it and fix the ending. Cheers
Comments
Brethren of the Five, Campaign. - Story focused
The Dwarven Tale - Hack 'N Slash
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
Est time is about 40 minutes
Link for comment: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?358842-UGC-The-Whispers-from-the-Void
Thanks a lot!
A scenario based on the lore of Lovecraft: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/newthread.php?do=postthread&f=1151
ID: NW-DUISZ4OXA
Brethren of the Five, Campaign. - Story focused
The Dwarven Tale - Hack 'N Slash
Reviewed mate, I left (brief) feedback on yer thread
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
Campaign: Night of Embers - NWS-DQX5GVNKO
1: A Flame In The Darkness - NW-DE47BTDI9
My advice to you would be to split it up into 2 or 3 separate quests within a campaign.
You will be more likely to see more plays that way.
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
Dude, sick! I will leave comment on your threads.
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
Brethren of the Five, Campaign. - Story focused
The Dwarven Tale - Hack 'N Slash
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
Duration: About 30mins
It’s my first quest and a bit of a work in progress, but it still needs to be tested by someone other than myself and I could do with some constructive criticism.
Thanks
if you get the chance and have the time I's appreciate it if you could take a look at my 2nd Quest "A Hidden Valley".
http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?357921-A-Hidden-Valley-Call-Of-The-Wild-Part-2&p=4550361#post4550361
Duration seems to be about the 30 minute mark, and there is one fight in there that should properly be classed as "tough", not "standard".
Some of the story elements might not make too much sense if you haven't played Pt 1, but I', happy with the story, its more about how it plays and feels.
Many thanks.
EDIT: Just logged in to tweak a few details and noticed I got two reviews overnight (well overnight for me I'm in UK), that bumps me to 6, so if you want to drop it and help other out of Beta Hell that's cool.
All The Best
Looking For Reviews For Your Foundry Quest?
Drop By Scribe's Enclave & Meet Up With Volunteer Reviewers.
It could use your review!
"One Step to Darkness"
NW-DNJC9SK7A
Duration: 1 hour (being generous). If you just go for the objectives then quite a bit less.
Call it "Beta Hell Than Heaven"
All The Best
Looking For Reviews For Your Foundry Quest?
Drop By Scribe's Enclave & Meet Up With Volunteer Reviewers.
It is a 15 minute hack-n-slash, whether it is story driven or not is based on the player.
http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?365562-The-Dirty-Dwarf-(Open-For-Business)
Shortcode:NW-DUSXF6LXI
Thank you
A short solo hack-n-slash: The Dirty Dwarf
cool, ill leeave feedback in yer thread
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34
So most of the way thru this one I thought wow this is really a great fun quest. 2 great quests in 1 day.
Then I get to the end, and it's feeling like...ok this is draggin on a bit, could tighten some stuff.
Then i kill the dudes in last room and I'm expecting the treasure chest, but instead I talk to these 2 guys, and no treasure chest. It says...go thru the portal, so I'm like..ok. I do and then the quest is gone from my journal.
A little disappointing, esp since it was so long.
In short, there are some spelling errors & I would work to tighten up what you have ...try to shave some time off it and fix the ending. Cheers
Bill's Tavern | The 27th Level | Secret Agent 34