Waiting For a Tear (short fanfic)

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Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
edited October 2011 in The Fanatics Forum
This is a short fanfic I wrote at school today in the library, I hope you enjoy it

EDIT: I have published the story to me weebly, I hope the mods dont mind this :)
http://lynseysheart.weebly.com/short-stories.html
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

'...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
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  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Whew, sorted :) the forums really muss things up sometimes! I only wanted to copy from a word document :/

    For anybody whom is confused, my character had recently lost her partner. And, in a small loss of sanity believing he'd help take the mob of wraiths down, she remembers shes on her own, and takes her anger (and I guess, sadness) upon the wraiths. Scary stoofs! :o

    And Yu Dun roughly translates for plume shield, the other chant my char did was for barrage of arrows as you may have guessed :)
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • Silvychar - Sanctuary
    Silvychar - Sanctuary Posts: 3,576 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    *applauds*

    Really well written and nice story! =)
    Definitely kept one reading on.
  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Silvychar - Sanctuary wrote: »
    *applauds*

    Really well written and nice story! =)
    Definitely kept one reading on.

    Ohh thank you! b:thanks I really appretiate that!
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • Murcas - Sanctuary
    Murcas - Sanctuary Posts: 299 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Very well written. I love the descriptions and the emotion. I especially love the theme, as bitter-sweet as it is. b:victory

    Sorry, my brain doesn't work all that well, right now. b:surrender
  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Thank you Murcas, And now you just plugged in what I was trying to remember about this. Bitter-sweet was jsut what I was aiming for, I just forgot the word, silly me! b:chuckle
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    A little bump.. Just to say that Since the forums dont like me copying and pasting, I have moved it to my weebly site. I hope the moderators dont mind :)
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • TruthWarren - Raging Tide
    TruthWarren - Raging Tide Posts: 1,028 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Esnemyl! b:victory

    I haven't seen you in forever! Then again, I haven't been on in about that length of time. Love the story. You should tell me how to get in touch with you too :p
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

    iwotm8?
  • Bellefleurs - Raging Tide
    Bellefleurs - Raging Tide Posts: 733 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Wow i just cant describe how awesome this is.
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    Retired nonfactor archer.
  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    TruthWarren - Raging Tide wrote: »
    Esnemyl! b:victory

    I haven't seen you in forever! Then again, I haven't been on in about that length of time. Love the story. You should tell me how to get in touch with you too :p

    Hi Truth! Me neither, but its just cause its exams and stuff this year, i'm still active around here and planning to come back. If you want to find out what i'm doing keep an eye out on my site, it hash a blog! :o
    And thanks for the comments on ym story, i'm doing another one about a veno and a seeker :D
    Bellefleurs - Raging Tide wrote: »
    Wow i just cant describe how awesome this is.

    Thank you Belle, i'm really glad you enjoyed it b:cute
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • krittycat
    krittycat Posts: 4,187 Community Moderator
    edited September 2011
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    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver wrote: »
    EDIT: I have published the story to me weebly, I hope the mods dont mind this :)
    http://lynseysheart.weebly.com/short-stories.html

    It's fine.b:mischievous

    I used weebly to make guild sites for RH, and they're linked in my signature there. As long as it's not to another game forum, it's okay.

    b:victory
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  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited September 2011
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    Ah I see, thanks for the Info Kritty, i'll know to post there rather then here from now on. b:cute
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2
  • Esnemyl - Dreamweaver
    Esnemyl - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,079 Arc User
    edited October 2011
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    "Shouwei turned around and grabbed Domari's hand genyly, she almsotpulled away. The instinct inside of the young veno told otherwise.
    "We need an ambassador for a race known to Pan Gu, its come down to you, miss Domari. You were the first to see our kind. Please, come with me to our city.. I don't want you hurt out here" "

    Just a little preview of my next story ;)
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]<3 by Silvy
    Reborn ditzy archer with a serious oreo addiction =3

    '...cuz my IQ is just above what is required to function as a human' - tsumaru2

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